wow. this is so intense. you seriously have talent.

"i think i might be lost in the stories you paint before my eyes"...i really like that...and the whole poem as well...

truly yours...

I like this. (:

ah, i can definently relate to this. nice job!

an excellent ending. very real, realistic dialogie and it contrasts nicely with the rest of the love poem. the whole if it is pretty ironic i guess, or paradoxical, whatever words mean that one thing and the opposite together. i like the title too; it makes you think. :) namarie.

love, c.induced.

nice.. i can really relate.. i had this experience with someone who told me i was the only one.. but then he was also going out with another girl.. (ouch!)

anyway.. i really liked the poem..

"and sometimes i wonderwhat you mean when you saythe lies tickling my ear:

“i love you, ilove you,”

don’t say that,so loud."

very nice..

i think i've gotten cavities; this was so sweet!

~* Noelle

that's beautiful and so incredibly true for a lot of girls i know(myself included) they kno that the guy is lying to them and they hate it and love it at the same time. really good, keep writing

us*A

this was so sweet. it was beautiful... 'and sometimes i wonder what you mean when you say the lies tickling in my ear: ''i love you, i love you'' don't say that, so loud' i really love that part. it's beautiful.

very vague, not clearly defined... the best kind of poetry. beautiful work.

pretty. i loved it, especially the part about the lies "i love you, i love you" that was really intense. the last line was lovely. good job♥

hm... i like the dark, kind of surpressing kind of feeling to it. good work

keep writing!