;D Wonderful story! It's neat and original and I loved the ending. ^_^ It doesn't say that it's complete, but I'm assuming it's done? Just in case, though, it'll be on my alerts.

Wow, what a capitivating story! I loved it! Very unique, and I loved the overall concept of the living needing the dead and vice versa. Great job!

wow, gorgeous... I love it. it's short but there's so much going on with the characters... what a unique story. it doesn't get bogged down in the details, and I admire that. short but cutting.

and absolutely enthralling.

Wicked. It had my attention the entire time. Good job.

I was totally entranced the whole time. Very fascinating story.

Very cool. I liked this quite a lot, though the end bothered me for some reason. Still, very good :P WRITE MORE STUFF LIKE THIS.