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Reviews For: Destiny

Rick-e 2006-10-04 ch 6,	abuseweh? already 3 new chapters! sugoi! reviewnya gabung aja ya! =p finally ada fight scenenya! haha the way you describe the monster is pretty good! (sampe kebayang lendir2nya >_
Rick-e 2006-08-06 ch 3,	abuseHey hey ^_^ agh this chapter ends right before the adventure starts! ga sabar lanjutannya... =p that carving caliber gave is suspicious... does it have any use later on? eh eh can you post flo and kate's picture somewhere? the way you describe them makes me want to see them in picture ^_^ hum.. that's all i think... keep it up ne! ganbatte! ja!
Rick-e 2006-06-05 ch 2,	abuseMy first signed review! harus bangga lo chel! (apa seh..haha)umm... thanks for answering my question! cuz it's been nagging in my head, hehe.I can't wait for the next chapters! ganbatte ne! keep it up! ^_^ -Ricky
Ricky 2006-04-24 ch 1, anon.	abusemoshi2 ^_^ kore wa ricky desu yo~! hehe, you finally pusblished it, huh? i like the intro! it's more informative and makes me want to read the next chapter.. nice descriptions on the characters too.. my comments... well, there's the grammar, but hey! who cares about grammar =p (my english sucks too y know) oh and i have a question! it's been nagging me for some time but... how come maybelle can go to get some water in the river if she's not allowed out of the house? just curious =p okay that's all i think.. can't wait for the next chapter! ganbatte ne!