ZOMFG!! This is awesome!! Your style is quite interesting!! ^^ I like all your little jokes about how he's balancing serious with the two vamps who are fighting over him!! XD Go after Assiah I say!! Ya dark and mysterious vamps!! >w< Down with the cocky vamps like Luthen!!

I love this story! ^^ Your grammar is very good unlike some... =_= Keep up the good work!! Can't wait to read more!

Hey, I really loved this story, it's a great mix of comical and angst. Do you think you'll write a sequel? -bounces up and down repeatedly- Please, please, please? I really want to know who Dai ends up with, or maybey both of them? -raises a brow- or at least answer me this. Was it Fai that attacked Dai's family and Assiah who comforted him? that seems really plausable, but as of now only you know. Great writing, and goodnight -bows and disappears-

Very good. I much appreciate you bringing this to us. Thank you.

I don't suppose there will bea sequel because I would very much lime to read it.

This story was unbelievably awesome to read. I couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. You should seriously consider getting it looked at by an editor or something of the sort. This is WAY to good to just be left like this on a site.

I can't believe how fast this story actually caught my attention. You kept it well written from the beginning to the end, with very few mishaps. The only things I might recommend putting in is explaining more about Dai's dreams, and how they connect with Assiah, and how he had this dream before Assiah bit him. At least that's what I think happened...Anyway!

I'm so totally recommending this story to all of my friends that are interested in supernatural stories. This was awesome!

You. Are. Amazing. You should write a sequel or something. I love this story.

they all have very interesting pasts, but I'm more interested in what Dia is doing now than anything.

Wow.

No. Really. Wow.

I absolutely love this story. Really and truly. And I'm so glad that I found it. There are a lot of vampire stories out there but this one just seem so unique. Can't wait for the next chapter :D

I love this story so much! Please continue, I want to see what happens!

This story has always been really good but I think it just got a lot better. Now you've added suspense, romance, and jealously. I love it and I can't wait for you to update. This is a really good vampire story.

You=amazing.
I'm so astounded at how good this story became. You got my heart pumping quickly near the end there too.
: )

Oh, the plot thickens. I am still wondering when and who is going to turn Dai. It's seems like both Assiah and Luthen want him turned but neither actually want to be the ones to do it for fear of Dai hating whoever does.
It will deffinitely be interesting to see where all of this leads to in the end. It almost seems like Assiah, Luthen, and Dai have crossed paths before...

Great work so far,
Kynn.

the build up of the story is very good and how you reveal the characters slowly but efficiently. it's an interesting plot; being that i'm not fully sure where it's going and that's what makes me want to read more.
: )

I adore this story! It's wonderful. I like all the little tid bits you put in to give us a better understanding of all the characters. Even the little dialogue doesn't bother me. Well, I sincerely hope you haven't given up on this story. It's worth a lot more than the 5 measly reviews it has.

I'll be watching!
~Malice

This story continues to be interesting and well written, in my eyes anyway, but I was wondering if you could put Assiah or another one vampire in it more. I was also wondering if you could put a little more interaction with the characters instead of so many thoughts of the past or dreams.