the title is perfect for this. yes, it fits perfectly.

i also love the style, in particular how 'classic' it makes the poem feel. yes, it is pretty.

~* Noelle

i really like this poem, and the title suits it so well, considering what i'm thinking and about to say. this poem is just so realistic. so many poems are just all phazed-outunrealistic, but this, it was so downtoearth, saying it how it is... and yes, a little clumsy, seeing as what it's talking about and i really like it tho... you did a nice job.

I harbour too many relationships too (I think that's the right word for it, at this moment in time). Made me think, deeply. Awesome work.

Awkward friendships as a Venetian **

Has with the philosophy boys that can’t afford her,

Such pretty words, but who knows how to act

When there are good intentions

jesus that was amazing. so evocative, such gorgeous imagery... *bows*

"Honey, I’ve always been a rock and roll babyWith a movie star gloss over attitude,Freaking out in my rebel danceHair wild with my huge sunglasses"god, i love this so so muchnice write.

-smiles- almost seems to have a touch of class to it.