This was so good! i must say, i'm in love with alex, lol. he sounds so sweet. the second chapter made me blush like a bloody fool. update soon! i'm loving this.

hmm...good, please keep writing! I want to know what happens next! Please!

i'm confused.

does alex love his sister like... a girlfriend or love her like she's his sister?

that's disturbing... if he likes her as more than a friend...

Good story keep writing

This is very good so far, please keep writing!

Good story. I wonder where it's gonna go from here. I really like your descriptions, you have to help me with that. You reall can put a picture in someone's mind.