Your story really got to me. I'm in the same position as that guy. Anyway, excellent story and a good read :)

What's a Darlie commercial? And the poor locker door had done nothing...wow, self-control. I would have taken out my anger on the door, no question. Aw, the part where he wants to be the one to comfort her is SO SAD. Fate loves its little games. And the curse of loving her...they sound like song titles, ya know? My favourite part is the last two paragraphs. Great story again!

This was beautifully written. Cute, depressing, and an enjoyable read. Awesome job. Keep it up

Wow, that was a really cute story. depressing a bit, but so sweet, and definitely making me swoon at how much a guy can be devoted to a girl. I liked the lyrics and especially the ending.

This was really quite good--in a slighly creepy way--but awesome nevertheless.

Holy crap this is friggin awesome! I love it! Good job!