Hey, it's okay, totally understandable -.-. I used to write my chapters on my brother's laptop too when my computer was busted xD. But of course, I'd make sure to delete the stuff as soon as it was posted >_>;.

Remember, school and work first! Sadly, yaoi comes after all the icky stuff :(.

~Sei.

Yay! I finally got around to reading this! And so far i like it, though i really just read it fast. I've got thoughts swirlig around in my already stuffed brain that i need to write down for "Dear Boy", so i'll go back and re-read later at a much slower pace.

P.S. - Writer's block sucks, don't it? I havent had it bad for my current fic yet, but it's bound to happen. Shawnie says just picture everyone nekkie in the fic and it'll help...so far it's only given me a headache from the sheer whiteness of Spike's and Angel's skin...not that i'm really complaining! ^_^

I thought this was a good chapter. I liked that we got a little bit of Raven's past.I noticed you used more description about Niko's tail and ears to show his feelings and I love that. I would also love a happy ending so if that is possible that is what I would like. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Ooh, I get a special mention!! :D Although... I'm still writing my next chapter as well- hopefully I get that done soon too D:. It feels like after each chapter, I encounter this little halt T_T. Sigh sigh...

But yes, as for your chapter! That was pretty sad- I didn't know Raven was an abused child o.O. I think I'm going to have to reread everything to refresh my memory of this story. Yesh, that I shall. Hmm... as for which direction your story should take, I really wouldn't know lol. Usually, I like reading what the author has in mind- input from readers is all right, just as long as it carries out the main idea of the author. Oh, by the way, I'm guessing Niko and Raven get hooked up right? ;D

I finished watching Ouran High School Host Club!! Did I say that right? Well yeah, now I know what you're talking about lol. Those twins are so... incestuous! xD At first when I was watching it, I couldn't tell them apart- I mean, really, how can you? It's anime, so the style of drawing would of course LOOK IDENTICAL- unless the parts in their hair was different. But then, after listening to each of them talk, I could tell who was who. They have different voices :D. Kaoru- the uke twin- has a much softer and delicate voice. And Hikaru- the seme twin- has a lower kinda more nasal sounding voice. ^^ Have you finished your fanfics of it? I wouldn't mind taking a look at it lol.

This story is good. I like Niko and how the story is progressing so far. The only thing that I think really needs to be improved is your descriptions of the characters. You mention Niko's ears and the position of them when in a certain mood, which I really like, but you never mention his tail. I think it would be an even better story if you commented more on the appearances when in certain moods, or even just to refresh our picture of the character. Other than that I think the story is really interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing were it goes.

I vote Raven because I think it would make for a more interesting story. Plus I just like Raven's personality. He's mean but not cruel.

This story seems very interesting so far and I want to read the next chapter right now, but I wanted to ask what a valkyrie is? I've never heard of it before and wondered what it is.

Poor, poor Niko. He's really had a rough childhood. Hm.. I wonder where Raven was so late...

I'd love to see the new pictures, so please send them ^^.

Poor li'l Niko ;_; *sob*. Why Mamma, why?? It's not Niko's fault! Growl... anyway, yes please, I'd like to see the pictures! :D If you don't want to wait either, I'll send some pic thingies of my charas too lol. xD Like a little trade here heh.

Oh Ouran High School Host Club! I just started watching that actually lol. The first ep was just hilarious. I'm about to watch the second one now ^^. I'm gonna have to finish watching this before reading your fanfic lol.

Hey Cat here for those of you who come and read the reviews I forgot to mention in my AN that I have new pictures to go along with the story so if any one wants to see them either e-mail me at or leave it in your review!

well Ja-ne for now and see you in the next chapter!!

Cat is a great writer and person. her story is intresting, suspencel, and fun. if vet doesnt work out maby story wrighting will. or both

you r my favorit writer

Shay and Caramin are hilarious :D I think I like Shay's character a lot... such a tease ^^.

Oh and, um, you mentioned that you had new pictures of the characters. I'd really like to see them ^^. I sent you earlier a PM about that, but I suppose you didn't get it because the messaging system was down again at that time. But anyway, please send them to me ^^.

Keep up the good work! Happy New Year :).

Caramin is cute, he was picturing Shay as he "relieved" himself in the potty xD. *gives a thumbs up for hot-steamy-alone-time-in-bathroom* :D

O.. that made some things clearer ^^. NOW SEND ME YOUR PICTURES OF THEM >.>;; Minus those brackets cuz.. I don't want bots tracking my email D:. The horrid horrid spam!! ><

Hope your exams go well and happy holidays :D.

Ah, thanks for putting this chapter up. I was a bit confused about the characters at times, too, I have to admit ^^'. But now it's all good 'cos you posted the bios ^^. I can't wait to get to know more about Raven and Kayo, too. And you already know my opinion about the guy for Niko ^^. Well, see ya! Good luck with your finals.