 emeraude-irlandais 2006-04-24 . chapter 1Tip: Don't go into a career writing hallmark cards. xD This starts off so arrogant and sturdy, and by the end the reader feels sorry for the man who is alone, and has never really shared anything unequivocally with someone special. ^-^ I love how you really evoked the feelings of the poor guy sitting in the proverbial dark thinking about his lost 'loves'. Very good, overall. Keep writin'! `~bella~` |