That was a great story! I loved the ending, even if it was sappish. Yay!!

i don't care if ur a sap i liked the happy ending!

take that you shakespeare happy ending booyah!

have you heard of tristan and isolde?it dates back to the dark ages based on a true story (actually had a happy ending but changed by that bards as a form of courtly love) anyways it's good except the trajic ending... :)

i wish u luck on your writing

Hey, this is really creative and cool. I like it. All the stuff in the beginning was really detailed and interesting. Overall, it was a very entertaining read!