This was so weird, but so good at the same time.
I wish I had something more constructive to say, but I don't.

confusing but nice!

This story was intresting. Very intresting, and for that I applaud you.

Christ. Yeah. Yep. You are most definitely going to burn in hell for this.

But, really, that isn't too bad of a thing, is it?

Hm, Is the Kristian the kidnapper or is it Nikolai? and wats with the shots? lol your stories are so confusing yet i love them, mind sharing your secrets for this one? There's only so much i can speculate...

hm... intresting...

Uh...

Limited? You're weird. :)

Good... but weird. Seriously.

I loved this! It is really well written, you have a very good style. The only (slight) constructive critisicm that i have is that the changes in points of view confused me, however once i got into it i really enjoyed it. Keep it up!

I thought that this was great. I like how you think you have it figured out, then the idea gets turned on its head. It seems so simple that Nicolai captured Kristian but then it seems like Kristian arranged the whole event so that he could get what he wanted. Although not precisely since he didn't like what he was being injected with. But yes. Simply superb.

I like it! Really, i do! It's the POV that confuses me at first but the rest, especially the finish, is fine, no, not fine, but great! Heheheh...I've got to love you...well, i think i do!

It's interesting. Is it a one-shot? The only thing I didn't like was during the beginning you kept switching between Nikolai and Kristian's POVs and it was confusing. Generally you have to pick one and stick with it and end the scene when you need to switch.