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| amaryllisfaye 2008-07-18 ch 5,  | abuseso.so.good. wish you could write a sequel to this though, but im not too sure if that'd be a good thing to do, coz this is quaint and,..perfect for the moment. maybe a sequel would spoil it? I don't know..i just want to read more about them i guess. |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-07-18 ch 5, | abuseI love it! Short but absolutely wonderful! xx |
| Frozen.by.Sloth 2008-07-17 ch 5, | abusedude, I read your some of your stuff, and why I skipped this, I will not understand anytime soon. Nor forgive myself. I really loved reading it! It's really... cute. O.o Lol. But it is! It was a really enjoyable read, interesting and entertaining. Thanks for sharing! |
| HmongTuasNthi 2008-07-16 ch 5, | abuseI love it! Love it, love it, love! And that's a lot of love! =] Great story, stranger! |
| Never Loved Before 2008-05-26 ch 5, | abuseOMG! THIS IS SOO CUTE!! I CANT STOP GIGGLING!! OMG! I LOVE THIS! GOOD JOB! |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-16 ch 5, | abuseThis is sweet... :D |
| Dead Red 2008-05-13 ch 5, | abuseI really like this story - short but sweet |
| britty-tt 2008-05-01 ch 5, | abuseThis has got to be one of the cutest stories i have ever read! And all you have to do is look at my favourites list to know i have a read a lot! I have still have a giddy smile plastered on my face :) |
| oh y'know.that girl 2008-04-26 ch 5, | abuseSurprisingly, I liked Nathan's point of view a lot. I mean, compared to the way other people write about boys, this was actually entertaining and quite funny. |
| a beginner 2008-04-26 ch 5, | abuseupdate soon |
| Genato 2008-04-10 ch 5, | abuseWOW. great fic. it was so swet. loved the poem. weird about the cord though but still funny and ctue. and JIMBO? what the heck? lol. |
| meme 2008-04-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseHehe! that was really cute! i love it! |
| WhiteChristmas 2008-03-29 ch 5, | abuseGreat story! I love how Tawni is so different. =) If there's a sequel out, I'm going to read it. If not, definitely write one! |
| missraggamuffin 2008-03-26 ch 5, | abuseso cool... I really like your writing style! I can hardly find any authors that can make their characters go 'alive' or something. while i was reading, it felt like they were really talking. like they have their own personality and stuff. id say the ending was fast but you pulled it off really nicely. i had a good laugh too. especially nathan's bitter flashback. XD this is definitely worth a read ^^ |
| centenarian 2008-03-26 ch 5, | abusewow, really great. Kind of makes me sad that she liked him all through high school and it's only now that they're together. I mean, i know what it feels like. But hey, at least they're actually together right? So...okay, yeah, Tawni is so weird but I like her. She reminds me... of me. We both blab too much and talk fast and when we talk, we do those tangent things and people look at me like i'm weird and yes, i've been called random a number of times but people just don't see the connection. Sigh. Well, anyways, good job! |