Great story! :)

And yes, you should most definitely do a sequel. Nathan and Tawni are great characters- I wouldn't mind reading their thoughts some more. (Ah, that didn't sound nearly as creepy in my head)

Wishing you the best,
-Auphora

So cute! ^^

Aww! Fabulous!

I loved your story! I keep replying some scenes in my head. It is cute. Although I did think about being stuck in an elevator yesterday when I was getting into one. But I guess I wasn't too worried about it.

I really did like though about Nathan being around Tawni's brother. That was quite funny.
~*~Ngoc1231~*~

Aww! that was sweet! Just amazing.
I Loved it! Very, very well written!
Please write a sequel, pretty please? :)

love the story. it's so cute.:D great job!:D

i think this story is very sweet! (:

This was an Adorable Story

OKAY
I have now finished reading ALL the stories you have posted on here
And must say
I love them.
Absolutely amazing, and I really think you should write a sequel to this one, it's definitely good enough :D

I LOVED THIS! ^.^

aww..that is absolutely adorable.
Hehe..i was just waiting and waiting for them to damn kiss already.
Loved it :)

this story makes me so happy, please continue writing; you're amazing at it.

This is awesome! I wanna be stuck in an elevator with my crush as well!! X3
Tawnie is so shy and easily flustered!! Her cheeks must be burning from all the blushing!! Nathan'd have needed an egg to fry. XD
Nathan himself seems like a really decent guy!! I was so happy when he slowly(or rather fast actually O.o) fell for her, ran after her and kissed her!! *sigh dreamily*
The best part though was definetly when Jimbo came trough the ceiling totally oblivious to their current...stiuation of almost kissing and called himself their savior when all they wanted to do was kill him!! XD I laughed so hard, I feared I'd woken my family since it's about 5am here.^^
Whatever...

I just loved it!

Incredibly sweet! Usually I don't like short stories, but it would've been impossible not to love this one!