why?

Agh! Want more!!

that was very good, but also totally sad..wow. kind of hauntign really. good description, and good use fo the swing for symbolism and stuff.

=)zo

I like it. Like how it's not the fluffy/romqnce of usual. It's good.

Wow.

I'm not quite sure what else to say to be perfectly honest.

Just, wow.

Nice one. The last sentence was in particular my favourite.

Ah, the unspoken mutual frustration. I liked the swing part though. ^^