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Reviews For: Black Lace
boys kiss girls 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
This is crazy. It's so vivid in only 3 lines. Wow. Beautiful job.
ode to a firefly 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
And spooky it was. Good job!

~Christine ^.^
in theory 2006-04-25 . chapter 1
Not as punchy as you'd expect from a regular haiku but yeah, the creepy thing works really well.Nice work! :D
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