Ok, now that was awesome. Well written, not something you can just skim but you really have to read to get it. Very wonderful.

Beautifully morbid and poignantly disturbing. I love you.

O I liked this a lot ^^ teeheehee. Like, it's so simple but not at the same time... I HEART IT! I LOVE YOU!

wow... just wow...

Nice, its dark and creepy, yet I can't help be interested in psychology of the narrator(^_^)

Interesting. Well written for a short story.