*breathless gasp* Wow. Don't know what to say. This is really good! Going on my faves!

Much Love,

*K's Moonshadow*

Jesus...I loved this. Your poetry seems to be more in song form...Is that what you were aiming for? Oh well if it wasn't cause it's awsome. I sing and write music and would kill for lyrics like the ones you've written to work with VERY NICELY DONE!