I loved the tone of this. I loved the way it was written. And the groups you described at the beginning are so true to their description that it's sad. Good job. :)

Hey PinkThanks for your review I'm glad you liked it. This story is excellent, I sort of guessed she was a ghost before the end but you still delivered the twist superbly. That sentence, "Happily drowning in fun and games, blurred images of laughing cicus clowns" is just... perfect to describe what's going on and what it might feel like to die that way. I love it! ^.^