Beautifully rhythmic, with nice stanzas and repitition.

Eden. Nice.

This is very original, very "breath of fresh air". I like it. :)

I'd love to hear the demo, it'd be so cool to hear how these lyrics sound. :D

very good. deep and emotional. Great work on this!

~Sorrow~

oh wow. your band must be awesome, because these lyrics completely rock. i love them, they're so awesome. normally lyrics aren't all that deep, but this is incredible. i'd love to hear it... the detail/descriptions are just amazing. nice job.

omg i really love this! It's so deep and beautiful through the darkness of it all... i really love this. wish i could hear it to music!-AznRicebowl