so true

w.o.w.
yeah three seperate letters.
even though it is that short i love it.
your not hiding behind metaphors, or similies.
its nothing like ive ever written but i love it.
[can i borrow it? to read in my poetry class?]
wonderful.
although i personally would put distortion on a line by its self. just a suggestion

Very true! I love it, great job.

Very deep. I simply love it.

I enjoyed this. I think you did a marvelous job. Keep up the work!

~Ellesmere~

thats true. good job.