great, it's so vivid and raw with a real truth point of view, great job. keep it up.

Back again!! I loved this, for there are these guys that call me emo at my school, i just wanna punch then out, but I'm considered the innocent girl by the teachers and so they feel pity for me, can't lose that, can I?! lol good job you summed up just what it feels, you have great talent and don't let anyone tell you different!