Your story seems sweet, and also has first person point of view. I like it ^^, oh thank you for the review--even though it was a strong one. But ya, keep up the great work.

Waterhealer

Wow, this is a really cute piece. It's short, but so sweet. I have a feeling that this piece is a bit abstract, like the guy's thoughts are kind of choppy, but that's okay. I think it makes the whole thing work like that. Wouldn't it be nice if all guys were so sweet...

this is such a sweet piece. i loved the innocence of the characters.

This was really sweet! I liked it a lot! Simply written and a joy to read. It was cute yet not overly smooshy or fluffy which I really liked... Very clean cut and just nice to read. Great job!