Reviews for Rain
AsianScaper 7/11/06 . chapter 1
Interesting how the cuts in the lines facilitate in reminding one of the pattering of rain drops. Love your imagery. Particularly like:

"Open my mouth to the Skye

until my throat was full

and you poured off my chin

into my cupped hands."

Wonderful! Keep writing!
followureshadow 4/25/06 . chapter 1
Don't you love rain? I absolutly love rain. Beautiful poem..