Anyone could relate to this... nice rhyming, too. Great work!

The end made me laugh, but it's easy to see your frustration in the poem. Well written! I like your style a lot. I wrote "Tears in the Darkness" in April- not too very long ago, but a few months. Thanks for your reviews! D Maranwe

Sara! I posted a new poem; check it out, okies?

As always, you blow me away. Stunning work! Keep it up!

Anna _

HAH i like the ending. Very good i really liked that. Nice work. Good rhymingthanks for review _

That was good i like the was funny in a way

o lovely twist at the end. I like it, the rhyme(not sure if that's spelled right) was very good. Awsome job, rock on!

cool. i love the twist at the end!

-wizard-

psthanks for the review!

Great poem, always like a nice twist at the end to make you view the whole poem diffrent. Keep up the good work.

- Pookin, Thanks for the review D

excellent poem! totally loved the ending! keep writing

The ending took me by surprise. Excellent work.

I Love this poem, and t think you HAD to write for english, so it's like you had to think of it, I'm awful at poems for school! I love this poem, awesome job! it's perfect!