i like the way you pack a lot of emotion into so few words. it's hard to do. what i mean is, the way you saw, or chose, your words, and you don't even have to go into long sentence like descriptions and yet you portray the image as clear as ever. this poem does that very well and it creates a serene feelings and i felt calm and happy reading this. great job :)

The poem is even shaped like a river of rocks! The way you did the line breaks was very clever, I thought, because whether you meant it or not, each line is sort of chunky and has an aura of overall rock-ness. Again, imagery and tone was beautiful. I loved the ending.