very true. i love your insigh here. simple and to the point and nicely written. good word usage here as well.

'lo. Ahh... thanks for your review on my poem. x).. I thought I'd return the favor. Honestly, I rather liked this poem when I read it a few times over and aloud. I love the fact that it's straight to the point, and you're just being honest about the whole situation - whatever that might be. The thing that gets me, though, is that I really dislike how there's not much more substance beyond what you've written. Your words have some impact on their own, and that's great. Still, the poem's lacking in support. I'm not truly convinced that what you believe is what I should believe or even a belief that I should respect. The belief I speak of when you say "the way to go may not be the way I (you) want." I can feel the tone and mood of the poem resounding at the end, with that one last line. Seeing as this piece is already written and seeing as how most people I know don't seem to like rewriting their poetry, I don't ask you to change it. I simply suggest you work more on maybe incorporating some of your feelings, your emotions, into the intro in your next piece. I repeat now that, overall, I really did think it was lovely. =)