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| The Deville's Dog 2006-04-28 ch 1,  | abuseHey there I really liked this, nicely tense and I love the perspective that it's written from, like a little kid, lying scared in bed like I can remember doing. I also love the tense note of resignation that it ends on. Great stuff. |
| Winged Shadow 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThat's ... creepy. And ... disturbing. Somehow. :) yEah, whatever. Pretty cool, though. |
| wolfeh 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseCool - freaky... i like it! ^_^ I see those lil spots of light, too!! ^_^ Coolios! ~wolfeh (11.38 in the am) |
| Duck8 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI quite like this, ur right in that the genre is a bit ambiguous but ur writing is good and i like you imagery and the structure of the piece Go u :) |