OMG! I love the Your're Beautiful part!! I was cracking up...Kathrines goes "I SAID thank you!" Ah haha hahahaha!

Hahaha i loved the james blunt bit at the end, this is funny!

"Avaricious mothers who wanted their daughters to marry this eligible bachelor stripped their daughters naked and belly danced in tea cozies to catch his attention."
OH GOD THAT JUST hahahahahahahahahhaha LMFAO
oh god
i'm sorry
just
hahahahahahaha


"I like it freaky."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAAHAHAHAHpkfmop xdmpgoxfjhpox
oh my god
i effing love you
south park references, james blunt, pussycat dolls, rhyming lines oh god this is awesome hahahahahaah
i can't stop laughing
i love you

Wow!
I loved this! i had just finished reading "Land of Red" and was totally not expecting this! It was fabulous! this first chapter i was laughing so hard!
im in love with tristan he is so delightfully stupid!! he makes my heart happy!
you so need to update! and i see that it's been awhile since you have written on this piece!
just know that u have a new devoted fan!
J.

LOL at the sleeping mask, and nice job quoting James Blunt. This is definitely something original and creative, and of course funny.

O.O There's this part where their dialogue rhymes...huh...

And, gosh, song quoting! XD

At first I was a bit wary of your story, but it had been reccomended to me and was not rated M, so I assumed I'd be safe from anything too, uh, raunchy. Then Kenny died and I'm like, "Oh my God, you killed Kenny!" and was laughing for the rest of the story. Put a smile on my face!

okay, I don't know if this is supposed to be a funny story, but I am close to tears, reading him reciting James Blunt lyrics (and the gwen stefani before)

this is great :)

is the rhyming dialogue deliberate?

Man, this kid really is dumb, isn't he? Maybe it's the Tristan name, because I had a character named Tristan and he was pretty dense too...

Jesus Christ woman, this is a good story. Update soon, I've been left hanging!

wow, i love the twist. i honestly didn't see i coming!

i hope you update soon!

to be a bit frank, which character's do you want us to love? apart from Katherine. Because Tristan is an arse but his brother..well, lets just say he's crude. Crude but bordering drude to wet pants.

Does that even make sense? Doubt it.

Anywya, please write soon!

You can only have one DEFAULT chapter m'lover

Oh my God! It's almost 3 AM where I am right now and I am laughing my guts out! That was marvelous what you did with the rhyming thing and James Blunt's song! really! I think I'm going to have a heart attack!