At first I wondered why you put this under the category of horror, and you made me realize that my version of horror are monsters and cold blooded killers and suspense...however, your form of horror is scarier because Angel could be anyone walking on the streets, there could be people like that out there, and you force us to realize that not everything is lovely and happy, not everything is perfect and normal, but that there are people out there who have just stopped caring and completely throw themselves to the dark side of life as it swallows them whole. You make people open their eyes, and make them think about the dark side of life, make us realize there is a dark side. This is more horrifying than a story about something that does not exist...and it scares me even more. Great job, loved the style. It seemed as though Angel was confiding directly to me, telling me his old life before he died. It is a style that is hard to write for most people and yet you pulled it off with five gold stars. I can't wait to continue reading more of your stories!! Sorry for the long review, btw. :)

I like the style of it. The dark humour contrasting the tragedy. Slightly reminiscent of 'Trainspotting'.

I was in a state of awe while reading your words. So perfectly place, meaningful, profound. Wow, to say the least. Amazing.

-When Words Lose Meaning-