This sounds like the way I feel. Great!

Woah! That ending slammed me! My heart actually lurched... Awesome job!

The last line is devastating to read.So much hope and joy before that. Good read.

-sigh- Nice piece.

aaw...such a beautiful poem...but there was a sense of loss in it...maybe thats wot u wanted to convey? But yer, i like this alot...i am so sorry i havent reviewd u l8ly, i missed ur stuff^_^ Hope to hear back from ya soon as well! *hugs* Great poem again!

Lovely work Hidden! Very elegant piece here, sweet and melancholic but it focuses more on the beauty of love. I just wanted to drop by and let you know how much I appreciate all your time and support It is a great pleasure and honor to be able to call you my friend. Keep in touch ^_^

Intense. I like your description of flying on falcons' wings and falling.

beautiful. you wrote this with perfect emphasis on the right lines and the exact amount of overshadowing the ones that didn't mean as much. great poem.

I like this especially since you seemed to let go of control and just ran with this and have let the emotion flow. The only thing i don't like too much is the way you keep repeating "In love with you" I think it takes away the symbolism from this poem. But great poem all in all i love it.

first I thought, who is this about? did u forget to tell me sumthin??but i think i know now... the last line tells it.

very nice poem btw! really cute and such a sad end :(