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| glamorous-giggly-guy 2007-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseMe. Likies. Imogen Heap is legendary. So is Charlotte Martin. If u like Imogen, you'll love Charlotte. Love. |
| Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, short but clear. I like the use of spaces in "t o n i g h t", but because the piece was so short, I don't think the italics in sleeping or the bold for dream was needed. Granted, it creates a diagonal pattern in the words, and I like what those say ("sleeping dream tonight"), but I still feel as if it's just a little much for such a short piece. Nicely done over all though. |