Reviews for adolescence is one part recklessness

M3741 W1NG5 Alex 2006-11-02 ch 1,	abuseCool poem, it's both intense and realistic. I like the way you notice things people don't usually include in their writing, like how symbolic hair is. That sentence I just wrote sounded funny. But hopefully I'm making enough sense for you to understand what I mean. I'm not even quite sure what I mean. Anyway... Great poem, and keep writing!
meitnerium 2006-07-21 ch 1,	abuseyou know this makes all of my insides squeal...and while it will be uncomfortable in the end...it is wonderful now.