Reviews for Compagnons D'Âme

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Jades 2008-10-13 ch 5,	I don't know if you still check your fictionpress account because most of the stories haven't been updated in two years, but I figured I should leave a review anyway. I really love this story. It's amazingly well done, even your french! I hope you will eventually someday finish your storyies Jades
kiki 2007-08-06 ch 5,	Papillon should resist mostly anything associated with females since he's a male. Also I hope his fears are eased and that he'll be able to love Aigle if possible... Looking forward to the next update if possible...
chrnoskitty 2007-04-28 ch 5,	Wow, what a great story! The only thing that is a little bit hard to get used to is all the french and the dictionary at the bottom. If you have to put that much at the bottom of the story, it takes up so much more room than if you were to translate it when you insert the word into the paragraph. If parole (french) is the language that they are speaking, you don't really have to insert a hundred and fifty-four french/parole words into their speech. Just a couple woul add to the atmosphere well enough, without confusing the reader. Other than that, I think you did a fairly good job. Oh, and, In that long paragraph you had in this chapter or last, you could have broken it up into more easilly-read sentances. I completely skipped that paragraph it was so confusing. Well, that aside, I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
Gravilove19 2007-03-31 ch 5,	I can't wait for your next update.
serialxlain 2006-12-19 ch 5,	Shopping is foul. Nice threat at the end O.O Uh oh. Poor little Papillon. But the whole way of going about it was pretty cool... xo
Saiwa 2006-12-03 ch 5,	I R&R'ed on AFF but I thought I 'd just review on this too. Awesome chapter!
Skeptic-Critic 2006-11-28 ch 5,	You really had me going again...I always think the chapter is so much longer than it really is... I was so glad to get this chapter though...It seems like it's been positively forever...It certainly has been too long... Poor Papillon...He must be absolutely overwhelmed with everything...
Hikarichan20 2006-11-28 ch 5,	YAY! jumps up and down (swingsenior_jen here!) You underestimate yourself when you say the story is choppy. It read smoothly in my opinion, and I only found out that it was done in parts when I read your note at the end. I can't wait to see what Aigle's reaction will be to the death threat against Papillon (sp?), and I completely understand your school situation as I am in the last 3 weeks of school myself. Good luck on finals and don't neglect them! We all have a nice break coming up for you to write during. Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving and if I don't review before Christmas, have a happy one! Jen.
Arsinen88 2006-11-28 ch 5,	Awe poor Papillon having to go through all that. ^^ I wonder what Aigle wil do with this supposed threat to his butterfly? And I wonder when Loup's and Colombe's relationship will thicken also Aigle and Papillon's? Oh well I guess I'll just have to wait until your next update. See ya around and as always wonderful chapter. ^_^
Painted Desert 2006-11-28 ch 3,	I'm really likign thisstory so far even though I haven't read the whole thing yet. I hope that there will be some well written slash in it, so keep it up! Em
SerialXLain 2006-07-25 ch 4,	Aw poor Papillon! But when Aigle got him it was so sweet... Sorry it took me so long to read this...and sorry my review's so short and blah. ;-; Love oxox
Cherise 2006-07-24 ch 4,	I love French and I love learning new words, so this was awesome for me! The story is so cute, too! I wonder if he'll ever see his family, or his mother, again. Somwhow I end up wondering if they even missed him. He was family, but not revered.
Saiwa 2006-07-23 ch 4,	Once again, that was a wonderful chapter. I've even encouraged a few of my friends to read your stories.
Skeptic-Critic 2006-07-22 ch 4,	I keep getting to these new chapters and getting all excited because it looks nice and long, but with the translations it shorter than you think at first...And I'm enjoying this story so much...Who'd have thunk you could squeeze so much content into four chapters?
Skeptic-Critic 2006-07-21 ch 3,	Ah...You mean now everyone's going to know all the French words too? Darn...Well at least I'll understand them as I read...I'm not sure how much of a difference it makes but it's still fun...Duke Lightning...I think that's my favorite...Duke Lightning and Duke River...

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