Reviews for romantic salt - FictionPress.com

Kicking Poe 2007-03-08 ch 1,	abuseawesome personification and moving imagery - sheer pleasure to read. your words flow so easily and wash over me...cheers.
Manuel Fajar 2006-12-16 ch 1,	abuseI don't know who u are I don't know y u write But I know this 4 sure Ur words make me tremble Like yellow falling sear Tormented by wind's shear Thrown into space less fear Heart's venture into clear I don't know where ur from I don't know if gold crown Forever you will own Yet salt upon ur frown Would bring eternal tears & Vision's total smears Until ur smile fog clears & All of life endears p.s. Your poem is rich with sensation and feeling. It captures and embodies the endless oceans that flow inside our veins; and, all emotions boundless that crash against red heart. Having spent most of my life near, on and in the ocean and the seas, your poem is especially moving and haunting: hinting with nuances subtle, yet nearly overwhelming powerful what ocean means to me. Thank you for posting such a wonderful piece. m
simpleplan13 2006-05-13 ch 1,	abuseI love the whole water ocean thing... beautiful piece.. sad and well done
Ayx 2006-05-01 ch 1,	abuseI love that you are so discriptive. It is something I envy! Really nice piece Ayx
poetic abortion 2006-04-29 ch 1,	abusei loved it, particularly the second to last stanza, which i found quite intriging. oh, and the pretty. can't forget that. ~* Noelle