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| The bunny always dies first 2008-06-23 ch 16, | abuseand you just had to stop updating there didn't you? DIDN'T YOU?!! |
| Endowment's Seraph 2008-05-02 ch 16, | abusethis is really good. I like it alot. the only thing is that you changed John's last name from what it was in the earlier chapter when he was fist introduced. I like it. write more soon ~Mel |
| Estelin 2008-02-23 ch 16, | abusethis story was great keep up the good work. i can't wait for more |
| vIE-TeNDRe 2007-12-17 ch 16, | abusehaha finally i've been waiting for an update forever and i'm not disappointed!! keep on updating...please!! |
| YourMyOnlyHope 2007-08-04 ch 16, | abuseWow that was a good story so far, i like how you write it but if you want readers to still want to read, don't get too much overload on the story, just go with the flow and i would like the story to start to be a little more action but not too much. otherwise i really loved it so far, Keep up the goid work |
| HisMistress 2007-08-04 ch 16, | abuseOMFG CLIFFIE. why. |
| svmgeleta 2007-08-03 ch 7, | abusei bet the pendent grew only warm around keela's friend because maybe one of her parents/family member is the acual hunter and keela's friend has there blood in her.idk, that'sa my guess, lol. |
| witchwriter 2007-07-20 ch 16, | abuseYa! I was so excited for this update! I luv this chappy and bring home a new one okay?! evilly sincere, w.w. |
| AIAK 2007-07-19 ch 16, | abuseAh, I loved this chapter. You did a great job, really. I love how you actually put the names of places. I hardly even remember exact locations here. XD Yeah, I hate that about the water around Seattle, especially at Lake Washington. One of the reasons why I don't go swimming there... IN RESPONSE TO YOUR REVIEW, WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY POOR BRENAN? @o@; Ah, update please =3 |
| Olivine 2007-07-19 ch 16, | abuseMy dear, Lady Wolfine. I am ecstatic. I love you. Not really, but I do love you for updating this! I mean, I wasn't even expecting anything after reviewing What More Can I Give?, but then BOOM I see this in my inbox. You've made my day. Thank you. Now, for the story. DUN DUN DUN! I doubt it's a really bad coincidence, unfortunately, but we'll have to see. And I also doubt that it's okay that those humans saw Xaavir. I wonder what will come of that. You'll just have to update soon. Ha, now expecting more after THAT is too much. So I won't get my hopes up. Olivine. |
| Olivine 2007-01-28 ch 15, | abuseI love this story, and I wish you'd update more often. But this was a great chapter, and she and Xaavir finally kissed! Rather, she kissed him, but it works, either way, doesn't it? It sure does. And it's very sad that Hlen's brother died. It's really... I don't know. Comforting? that the supernaturals all have something in common, and they all know that they're all going to be there for eachother. Too bad real life can't be like that, with normal people, isn't it? Update soon! Keep on writing --Ss. |
| AIAK 2007-01-24 ch 15, | abuseAH! Love triangles and deaths?! ToT I really enjoyed the twists and your descriptions once more. They were very beautiful with the way they were written... Update when you can okay? Haha, and maybe we should discuss the crossover idea if you're serious about it. _AIAK_ |
| witchwriter 2007-01-19 ch 15, | abuseFINALLY! It's about time! You had us all worried sick!! And yea for Xaavir and Keela! Evil! Now don't worry us like that again. |
| tearitrightup 2007-01-18 ch 7, | abusedude, is keelassi really that popular there? or is that just exaggerated? other than that, i love the story so far. |
| ephona 2007-01-18 ch 15, | abuselove it |