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| theforbiddensong 2007-10-12 ch 1,   | there were some grammar errors (which you might have put in for effect, i don't know; i just thought i'd point it out) and the rhythm could have been improved, but the concept was good. good job and keep writing, no matter what your non-friends say :P |
| SpookyJezy 2007-08-27 ch 1, | I really like this. As long as you have will to continue to write what the others say doesn't matter. Keep it up you will constantly get better. and thank you for my review. |
| Dark Vampire Gurl 2007-07-03 ch 1, | I love your poem!! keep on writing!! this poem kind of makes me feel lonely... |
| The Gobbler 2006-05-30 ch 1, | Ack!! This is so sad... I can relate, even though this specifically has never happened to me before. It's awful when you think someone is your friend but they... well, aren't. Good poem. |
| VampiresTears 2006-05-07 ch 1, | It means that they rather pust me through the grade then try to help and find a way to teach me correct grammar. They just wanted to prettend that the problem didn't exist. |
| Raine0211 2006-05-01 ch 1, | Full of emotion. you might want to make a few more line breaks and what does this line mean 'Teachers wont teacher they send me through my grades.'. but other than that its pretty effective! |
| Embellished Heart 2006-04-26 ch 1, | Quite a sad poem in a way, but wonderfully written. Keep it up! |