Wow...I could just imagine the Lilies above the trouts and with the bees. I also loved the flow, hasty, yet it still manages to capture the imagination. I was wondering...if you don't mind...how come you don't put this as a stanza poem? It would be great in that style =) but do what you like, haha. I guess that's just how I do mine.

i really like the lovely and clever rhymes...very good imagery too...good job...

truly yours...