Okay, I am caught up again with this one. I just have to get to those other two stories that you have.

Rhianne can be so much fun in her arrogant violent way, she has to be a pleasure to write. I could see her doing the things that she threatened that Marc guy with. i got a bit of a snicker out of the line about him wearing more makeup than her. It reminded me of the line to Alteng about him wearing more frills than Ther.

Tae's appearance in the audience was interesting as well. I didn't realize that all these folks were part of a circus. It was surprising that Rhianne is a lion tamer, but I can kind of see that in her character.

Okay, I am catching up nicely.

The chapters seem to be moving along a bit better now. Maybe I am getting used to the characters better now.

i am glad we know what Veila is up to. Would the followers of Montusa be after to kill her because of the tattoes? Or does this society frown upon that? She does come off as virtuous, because of her need to flush out the corruption of the police. I would guess that you are working towards proving that a character like Bea Linta is not such a bad person. After all, she is helping out Silu. Of course, it is interesting that Phin feels the opposite of her.

Biry's meal was fun. I have many instances that you wonder what is in the stew, but that has to do with Olivier in the kitchen.

So, the little girl that Silu sees is an angel, or is this Simon? Of course, it could be a completely different thing.

I do look forward to seeing the Purge getting to Chime. I would say that you would have to kill off Charlie and his daughter. Let's see Tan would be a good one to out. Charlie is fun, but he is useless. Nip him off, too. Actually, although Bea is safe and secure on her island, I can see her getting killed off as well.

I've had a couple of rough weeks. So, I am really behind.

Anyway, this chapter isn't too bad. It is nice to see tan as what she was before. The bit about the telekinesis being a form of witchcraft reminds me of this fellow I work with and his philosphy on such things. He's a freaky little fellow, but my crew is straightening him right out.

Rhianna is a feisty little piece. I like her defence against the mind delving. But it is odd that Tan is worried about the telekinesis, but her telepathy doesn't bother her to use.

To switch to the memory flashback could use a little work. Somewhere she needs to black out or something. Maybe when Rhianna hit her with the force to get her out of her mind, she hit her head on the bed post.

You know, it could have been fun with those book. There could have been pictures of women in compromising position and strapped to the chair or table . . . boy, what would she be thinking of her Wasta friend now. I know, hush! This is not a comedy.

The second half said a lot about Silu's character and his weakness. It did better than his own scenes. I never thought of Tan that well off. To be caught and punished must have been quite an embarassment to her family.

Wow, I really wonder what is Tae's agenda here. Anyway, glad to see you update here. And yeah, will this story end by the time of the Purge? Because if so, then I believe this story will end soon and you'll start that new story you've been planning. :) Anyway, wonder what will happen next. And Rhianne's sure got some personality in her. Anyway, when will you shift the POV back to Leo? I thought he should be a vital character in this story you know... anyway, thanks for your review on Elven Chronicles. And guess you've received my review reply lol! XD

Well, glad to see you update this again. Anyway, yeah, guess this is a filler of sorts. To be honest though, I don't think the whole exposing plot will go on smoothly. Got a wierd feeling that Velia and Biry will be killed off sooner than later. :S Anyway, nothing of a CC here. Really wonder what will happen next. The ending's definitely interesting. Sorry if this review's short, but my attention span got screwed by random... :S

You know, the chapters with Silu are rather surrealistic.. He sees all these people and they talk to him, but it seems that Bea doesn't see them. Is this like, "I see dead people." line? The girl has some kind of reality because Leo sees her as well. Does Bea see these people? If she does, she does make for a convincing act at not.

I got a little giggle out of the excitment that Silu felt with his task, and Bea commenting on it. How embarassing!

I do have to admit that it was brave of Silu to help out Simon, even if it is to gain a favor. After all, he was afraid of the mind police.

As for switching back and forth on stories, I am of the opinion, if that is what you are comfortable with and where your muse takes you, do it. I have the bad habit of dropping stories when I do that. I hope you don't give up on this story since I am really getting into it, despite my few and far between reviews.

Leo sounds like a normal male. All my boyfriend can think about is sex. He needs a smack in the head for it sometimes!!

I would have had to give Leo one of those big wicked grins if I had been Daniel and told him that I was a person who murders people on trains. I wonder if Daniel is actually good looking, since this is from leo's point of view, and he is not interested in men, and all he looks for in a good woman is her curves.

The scene with the police was an interesting thing. It seems funny that they don't arrest those seeking the illegal casino. Leo is even denser for asking, but he is naive, as he was kicking himself for asking in the first place. Oh well, I guess the police figure that they will let the Purge take all the sinners and kill them, and they will clean up the rest afterwards. It would save them some work.

Velia is a nice girl, and I think Leo may have found this most beautiful girl. The line about he likes her boobs is so Leo. I could see him thinking this and wanting to say it.

read the entire story until now in one sitting. this chapter, it is true, isnt that exciting but its quite informative. polka goulde, eh? i like the fact that all the threads are beginning to slowly tie in. good job with keeping the story taut and complex without making it confusing.

btw, i would totally look forward to a weekly update so i hope enough reviewers can persuade you to continue that.

Well, I'll say that this is an okay chapter. Nothing significant to complain about. Polka seems like some kind of manipulative ** to me though. And the first part of this chapter, I think it will be better if you present hints on where Tan got her mind abilities in a certain way. I don't think I've got any info on this for the previous chapters, but then again, I maybe wrong due my sucky memory. But if it's true, then it will just make the reader go wtf in this part. Anyway, nothing much to comment here now. Just hope to see you update soon! ^^ Bye! :)

P.S: Starting on a new Elven Chronicles chapter now. Stuck at the A/N for the moment, but hopefully I can finish it within a week or so...

I've been kind of tied up with my more recent chapter. Sorry for the delay.

The out of body expierience went over fine with me. I had no confusion as to what Phin was doing to Rhianne. It is odd that she is aware but has no free will, but that can all be explained as the nature of the spell. And, i have seen such things go on wihtout the need of explanantion. I think I think this way because Rhianne strikes me as mischievous and defiant.

Tae will be Tae. It was noble that he was trying to save the boy. I would think because he didn't that explains much in the way that he turned out. Because Rhianne is in his mind, it does make him come off as a bit gay . . . and I don't mean that in a bad way. It is just a guy checking out a guy thing. All the same. it is Rhianne that is thinking these thoughts.

I like the addition to the thing about the Purge needs a quota. That is definately something weird about our world weaved in there. Everything seems to be set on a quota to be successful. even religion has that quota thing going. I think that it is the Jehovah Witness that have to convert so many people so that they themselves go to Heaven. So, having the Purge to need to have so many people killed comes off quite logical.

I will try to get to that next chapter today.

Well, it seems that silu could be an insanely powerful character here. Maybe even surpassing Phin (sp?) imo. Anyway, I don't think this chapter's weird. In fact, the scene is rather interesting. The whole issue of the Nice Man and the strange girl. And I also assume that Silu's got his memory back by now. Hopefully nothing happens to Bea. At least for now. And yeah, judging from the end of this chapter, I guess the Polka girl will play a crucial part of the whole story.

P.S: On your A/N, I'll say it's a good idea to focus on your other stories if you're running out of ideas. Gives you a distraction while enabling you to have a break and hopefully giving you future ideas on this story. :)

Okay, I am catching up.

This chapter does indeed move well. I think I might be getting to like Rhianne and Phin. Phin is a conviving little piece indeed. It is funny how he is toting about a bag of Tan. (That reminds me of a sick story joke, but the person in the bag was large chunks of splattered flesh . . . long story indeed!) If nothing else a bag of Tan is weird.

The police's reaction was a bit strange to say the least. Was that an outside force, or was that because Phin appears to be a priest?

Oh well, onto the next chapter. I might not leave a review tomorrow morning, but hang tight. I am working on it.

I am working on catching up.

Leo and Harry are indeed a lecherous pair. Kirsty needs a good smack. She kind of reminds me of someone I work with because of the religious bit.

I liked the bit about Dora being too much like Harry and Leo would never want to date her because it would be too much like dating his friend. That could bring many sick images to mind.

The way it sounds, Leo isn't going to be too conherent when he gets to his nan's home. She will just have to smack him about a bit.

Heya there! Sorry for delaying so long for the review. Anyway, good chapter here. I sorta like Leo's views on girls in terms of the words you used. Boobs x 3 lol! Anyway, I have this odd feeling that the girl Leo's going to find is Rhianne. And yeah, thinking about sex at the point near the end of the world is so funny lol! At least I admit I won't have this kind of issue lol! XD Anyway, interesting end to the chapter. I'll be waitimng to see what you can do from here... ;)

P.S: Oh thank God and praise him! Boro actually snatched a draw with Arsenal who was at the top of the English Premiership football table before the kick off. Viva Boro and may Aliadiere score more in the future matches. :)

Well, interesting chapter here. Anyway, on the whole inside a person's body issue, I've got onthing to say except that you might want to maintain the gender words (i.e. he, she, him, her). I don't see a problem with it here though. Just thought to give you a reminder. And yeah, interested to see part of Tae's past here. The whole background story in this fic though seems to sort of reminds me of His Dark Materials trilogy. Apart from that, nothing much to say. Anyway, hope to see you update soon again! ^^ Bye! :)