 Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2006-06-24 . chapter 1Nice...this is what good haikus are all about. Capture deeper meaning with a brevity of words.Kudos! |
 Ellerfru 2006-04-29 . chapter 1I like this, very interesting metaphors. It made me think of someone being hurt and shutting out the world, and without wanting losing all the nice things too... |
 Archipelago 2006-04-28 . chapter 1That is rather pleasant. Nice thing to choose as a topic for a poem. |
 hollyg20 2006-04-27 . chapter 1It's funny that we both posted haikus with the title including the word window almost at the same time! That's why I read yours...it is very well done. I like the symbolism and the flow. It's going on my favorites...keep up the good work :) |
 Princess-anna57 2006-04-27 . chapter 1Ooh! Wow! Very good haiku, great job! Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^ |