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Reviews For: Window Shades
Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2006-06-24 . chapter 1
Nice...this is what good haikus are all about. Capture deeper meaning with a brevity of words.Kudos!
Ellerfru 2006-04-29 . chapter 1
I like this, very interesting metaphors. It made me think of someone being hurt and shutting out the world, and without wanting losing all the nice things too...
Archipelago 2006-04-28 . chapter 1
That is rather pleasant. Nice thing to choose as a topic for a poem.
hollyg20 2006-04-27 . chapter 1
It's funny that we both posted haikus with the title including the word window almost at the same time! That's why I read yours...it is very well done. I like the symbolism and the flow. It's going on my favorites...keep up the good work :)
Princess-anna57 2006-04-27 . chapter 1
Ooh! Wow! Very good haiku, great job! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
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