i dont get it if he freaking loved her why did the hell did he cheat on her? this is really sad, like heartbreaking sad mostly on the girls side bc she had to endure everything and died at the end. i'm just not feeling it for the dude so much.

I LOVE that song, good representation of it.

awwe. its so sad. kinda made me cry at the end xD. good job.

wow.. that was great a great one shot!

whoa. wow. did i say whoa? i like this its tragic and sad. and the emotions and fears are all too real. nice. very good. keep up the good work.

Wow that was amazing and so sad. That was a really good one-shot.-Tweetz