i can't believe i didn't notice this sooner. i hope you update soon because i want to see where this is going with cale and his stupid girlfriend. and i hope she doesn't sleep with blaze. so update soon!! :)

Definately a good start, can't wait to see how you develop Meg, or who she is going to end up with. Keep it up darling, its awesome!

I'm too lazy to sign in, so I just typed my name.

Meg sounds a lot like me. Physical ** is the only way I know how to keep a guy too. Until a recent relationship... but oh well.

I think its cute though. The story. It's pretty sweet.

"Or a cat, depending on whether or not his Cat is there. Why? You ask. Because I want to claw her perfect little Barbie face off! Again, don’t ask me why."

I didn't really like that sentance, because unlike the other parts of the story you were talking to the reader, and the hasn't been a lot of that so far. You either have to talk to them periodically, or don't do it at all.

That's just my opinion. Otherwise- great story!Can't wait for more!

I really like Meg's attitude and the way you get into her character. Also, you do a great job of not making a "shopping list" of what a person looks like, instead adding details about their appearance throughout the story. But one thing that might be a problem is that you've portrayed Meg as really attractive and she knows it very well. It'd probably be all too easy to make her kind of annoying about her perception of herself. I'd like to see more about her personality than her attractiveness and attraction to other people...Other than that, I'm interested to see how things progress!

dang, i like this story. i mean, i didn't think i would like to read about a girl like meg but suprisingly, she reminds me a lot of someone i know. you have portrayed her reasons very well with out over doing it. so kudos for you. and its funny that jack can ead people so well. it gives insight to everybody while not really, you know what i mean? the point is, this is a really good story and i hope you continue with it. thats all.

I think this chapter is little short don't you? and i do like Meg but i was on a rant and i couldn't stop typing... can't blame me eh?

I'm back :) gotta use smilies :) :) ANYway back on track. I know i should be thinking about Meg but wat happens to dear old Jack? If you think about jack's kinda like Meg's conscience cause we all know Meg's conscience has either taken a vacation or died of misuse...or ran away then started writhing in pain on the street and died a horrible death because she voodooed it...

totally not liking the spanish guy...and i don't want her with caleb either...i think aaron would work...

I like it so far. I like Jack a lot - he reminds me a lot of my brother, although he's not gay. As for the other guys - please don't make all five guys like her. Only a few girls get that many guys and it just makes those who don't get any jealous :( I like the sound of all the guys, but I think I like Caleb the most, perhaps because of his name. However, a couple things bugged me. In the summary and first two chapters, you spell her name "Meghan" but in this chapter, it becomes "Megan." Try and pick one and stick with it. Also in the summary you say "her best friend, gay Jack" I think it would sound much better if you said "her gay best friend, Jack"...and then continued on. Just a few things that bugged me, but other than that, looks good :)

Great chapter! I like that we got a better look at all the boys, and Jack is fast becoming a favorite of mine! As for who our heroine should get with, I'm torn between that electric moment between her and Caleb in the last chapter and Blaze's great appearance in this chapter. You're men are all too good, I can't decide!

Fabulous stuff babeOllie May

darn, cale has a girl *sigh* oh well, blaze sounds good :) and yea, i tend to review after i read so if you don't see my review it's likely i haven't been on for a bit. but i ain't going no where for now, i like this story ~ Alenor.

I wish frat parties here were like that...but yea, I enjoyed the chappie. Jack seems like a fun guy, I hope he finds a man of his own. I wondered what happened to Meg to make her feel this way. Anyway, update soon!

Haha. I need to learn to log in.I spelt my "name" wrong. Haha/.

M. I was pretty sure you'd remember.Yep tender, fluffy- right words to decribe this one! Good job on this chapter. It's good to have you back.

I think Jack needs somebody.

haha this story looks like fun!