|Reviews for Excuse|
| Amalia Jagd 6/25/06 . chapter 1
wow, i really like this poem. im assuming its a doll... one you played with in your innocence. but since then things have changed. ? at any rate, its a very good poem. i enjoyed reading it.
| Disenchanted 4/28/06 . chapter 1
I like it. It's gloomy but compelling.
| Faithless Juliet 4/28/06 . chapter 1
Interesting - you had great detail in this, I loved the imagery of the smiles for the ceiling. Great work, keep up the good work.