TERRIBLE

The poem/song as a whole is pretty good. There are individual lines and sections, however, that are downright -awesome-.

My favorite part: "I never felt this way- / Heteroflexibly gay, / and that's okay."

The phrase "blood constricter" to describe someone is also really unique and effective. Great job in all. Keep up the good work writing!

(Oh, and thanks for reviewing Almost An Angel. I updated it again today, and I'm already writing the next chapter.)

This is a great poem! I really like the rhythem to it, and you used very powerful words.