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| Anliya 2006-05-11 ch 2,  | abuseThe prologue to your story really captured my attention, especially with the imagery in the first few paragraphs. I love how Prince Ezra responded to the boy's statement about Pa wanting him to marry a pretty girl. “Mother tells me the same thing.” Very witty and unexpected. :) The second chapter was a little confusing, but I think the mysteriousness was intentional. I wonder what Ji Lan/Ezra's mission/secret is all about. Continue soon! |
| obsidiandreams 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's really cute! How old are they? Poor Ezra. You must write more. Yes. |
| Letty Merrylegs 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI'm in love already! update soon k? |
| Damaged Material 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWow... |