creepy, but i like the way it flows.great job here. although i wont think that you actually killed a man. literally.

Hey! I like this, it seems slightly ambiguous (that's just me) and I like the alternating rhyme scheme. I hope this wasn't actually you lol

Thanks for reviewing mine, it's great to actually get an honest opinion for once; however regarding the relevance, there were some things I couldn't fit into the explanation. I mainly wanted to give a viewpoint of how rape affects some people's lives and why it should be dealt with more seriously ^^ It's also dedicated to a person I once met, kinda.

Hope you put up more stuff, this is great

wow, this is interesting, there is never a time where there is nothing more to say or to do, there is always more to see and to hear before you end the living presence of the netherworldly hurt, there is nothing more to see or hear, there is never a time where i though vilonce was ok...(ignore me)

true from both sides of the fence. it's a strong portrayalof the psychcology of war. the interplay of rhyme is really effective too.