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Aleron 2008-03-02 . chapter 4
It's been two years! Two years since you updated this! Hurry up; I wanna know what happens next! D:
klamydiaa 2007-09-11 . chapter 4
Aww.

From the sounds of it, Flame is evil.

Very nice story, I understood all the sentences WHOO!

Bravo,

Please update soon -puppy dog eyes-

Now, I have to keep with this story it's so good, so expect a review everytime you post a chapter :]

Toodles,
Amy
kiki 2007-08-06 . chapter 4
update, please?
DMLpacker 2006-11-20 . chapter 4
Another amazing story...it reminds me of the manga series "Demon Diaries" (I think the demon tutor in that one is also named Eclipse. He's to teach this innocent/hyper/clueless/adorable young boy how to be a Demon Lord. A hilarious, cute story.)
SerialXLain 2006-10-27 . chapter 4
"Letting Stormcloud wonder the halls in furry" Saw that... Wonder should be "wander" and furry should be "fury." :P (I've been such a grammar/spelling Nazi as of late O_O)

Aw. Stormcloud's too cute and I can't wait to see next chapter. Heh. I hate shopping myself. -_-


And I feel bad for Eclipse. I'm glad that Stormcloud's making him happy ^_^

xo


Ooh and happy late birthday ^_^
Saiwa 2006-10-18 . chapter 4
Awesome chapter. I really like Stormcloud and Eclipse's interaction
Shadow1290 2006-10-12 . chapter 4
hey i liked the update! MORE SOON please!
Jayn 2006-06-18 . chapter 3
Cool chappy! Stormclouds so sweet! ^_^ Please update!
SerialXLain 2006-06-18 . chapter 3
Aw cute ending for the chapter.

I love how you gave a look at each of the couple's lives with each other and their relationships. It makes me sad that Eclipse was alone till Stormcloud.

And I feel sorry for Eclips and Stormcloud for Flame...when will we learn more about this dude anyway? (ha I said dude.)

Congrats on your graduation, job, and date. ^_^

Love xoxo
Saiwa 2006-06-18 . chapter 3
I know I've said this before, but STORMCLOUD IS SO CUTE! I just want to cuddle him
Shadow1290 2006-06-18 . chapter 3
hey i love the new chapter! MORE SOON i cant wait but exactly how old is everyone and um.. isnt 16 old enough to have sex?! lol MORE SOON please!
Shadow1290 2006-06-13 . chapter 2
hey i love this story! short but good!! MORE SOON PLEASE!
Jayn 2006-05-30 . chapter 2
I'm really enjoying your story! ^_^ Very cool. Stormcloud is so cute! Please update!
SerialXLain 2006-05-13 . chapter 2
I love how Stormcloud just acts like a little kid. It's adorable. Poor Sky getting kicked...

I love Eclipse and Stormcloud. :wiggles excitedly: XD

You know what...You amaze me. You have so many characters... XD I get confused with them. You're pretty good if you're able to keep track of them all. Hehe.

Love xox
Saiwa 2006-05-13 . chapter 2
::give Jado cookies:: you are so welcome. I love being your beta it give me something to do when im not working.
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