This is so cool. I usually don't like poetry collections, but I just love this one. It could be the theme, or the fact that they're all related but all different. (And it might just be because this is all so good!)

"and this is surprising because snow/ usually likes the ones with dark hair"
(My favorite two lines. Awesome!)

My favorite part about this poem is how you broke it down. The length of each stanza and line seems deliberate and really works well. I love the "I am" "You are" lines and the last two stanzas are a fitting end. Great work and thanks for sharing.

oh hooray! the ending is the best!! such a pretty pretty fairytale. sorry i'm getting all girly, i just love love love it. "and that was when snowfell for summer."

:D

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such a heartwarming tale, and the ending is so so sweet! ~*

Words cannot describe how perfectly beautiufl that was. -adds author to favourites list-

gorgeous work. i love this so much especiallyt the 2nd verse:'i am the mil in your coffee/the rain as it drips onto your eyelashes...''you are summernovawinter'this is just beautiful.keep writing, never stop.

Great little collection. Sort of cutesy but also very well written, insightful and delicate and thoughtful. I liked the opening piece up a lot, really interesting. Also the choice of names are great, lovely succulent sounds, like tastes of personality! Nice stuff.

its like a fairytale almost except, well, not. lovely, lovely as always.

~* Noelle

like fairy tales condensed, i am somewhat in love with these poems. the common threads that run through them also give them a pulse. immensely satisfying to read.

oh clincher, clever

so much wit, hah, it makes me smile

This is brilliant! I've never read anything quite like it before. =)

~Christine~

this was just beautiful. i dont even know what else to say besides that. it's just beautiful.

this is so ** yummy. i love everythingyummy. and this... this is just amazing. you can taste it, love it. to no end. awesome.

what you are and what he/she is, it's just awesome. 'i'm the heart you broke...the dream that was shattered...the milk in your coffee...the rain...eyelashes... .falling sky...' all this was incredible.

she thinks he looks like an angel. raspberry-i love where you cut off this line

ah so wonderful.