i really like this story. and since im russian its interesting to see your perceptions of russians and the like.
just one little thing i would like to point out. usually russians spell "Nikolai' with a j at the end. so Nikolaj.
odd i know. but j is like ya or ai in different contexts

Jesus fuck, I'm 1/4 Irish and I fucking HATE these people. Of course, then again, I hate most Irish on principle of being wife-beating alcoholic sonsofbitches.

I think I prefer my German side.

And good God, I hope to all Christ the little shit gets what for. [brogan, that is. i'm very pro-Russian...in just about everything].

--TheOneYouCallWe

Oh my god I loved this story. The ending wasn't what I expected at all. I kind of hate it and love it at the same time.

well the story worked out for me lol. desya and kolya make the best couple ever. they should get an award or some shit yaay.

Well really you're right it was totally wrong of them to think that you would have fully developed you're characters in one chapter. Especially if they are complex characters as you seem to be implying. : p

I love that this has so much Russian culture and names and stuff in it. Its nice to see someone not completely butchering it by stereo typing all Russians as angry alcoholics...though i guess THAT is technically what Kolya is...Lol, but then again he's only half so he doesn't count. I even like the name Modest, mostly becuase Desya actually sounds appropriate. :D

Aww, poor Modest...
Haha. He's real cute though.

just reread the story and realized that I didn't submit a review the first time around... This piece is truly unique and intriguing, I was admittedly pretty skeptical on the get-go but plowing on proved worth it. anyways I mostly reviewed for the sake of tipping my proverbial hat to an excellent work of art.
Also, in lieu of your "favorites" list, I read some truly mind-blowing writing by "Damned Soul of Chaos" and I may very well go kill myself now.
More fittingly, her.
Words can scarcely express my gratitude for the educational exposure to Darwinism at its finest

the story is really nice but i just cant help but feel that nikolia doesnt deserve desya and i really wish desya should have left him because he just saw someone who said he loved him call him a rug and he still/and always will date other people he shoudnt have to go through that

I cant find the joint account like everytime i search for it it doesnt come up...

YAY revenge really is sweet.

That was like seriously like the part of the movie where the main character kills off everyone who does him wrong and you just cheer him on and forget all the bad shit he went through!

NO SEVASTYAN HAS A CANCER!

thats like sucks majorly. i liked him too.

Ah does Kostya feel guilty? Jeez just when things go right Nikolai happens.

Well it's a little late for Nikolai to think that he loves Desya...

There is seriously more people harming their loved ones than enemies harming enemies...

I like Leone...hahaha. He made business cards for a hit man...How much cooler can you get?