Good...very good. A lot of people use different formatting (within words, breaking up words, etc..), but not very many people know how to use it (well). Congratulations, you do!Yours, Clarissa

i dont like those last to lines.. they sound kinda weird... very fond to just sounds wrong

other than that I like it a lot.. the format is really great and the title is awesome

Really love how you accentuated some words. I think it makes it impossible to not read it without emotion, which is lovely.

Much appreaciation for the review, by the way. I really like your poetry - which is rare for me to say. Keep up the spilling

Very very nice. I love the format in this. It's great. Especially "bre/ak". And I love the last 4 lines in the first stanza. Very cool. I loved it.

erm. hi. YOU'RE BRILLIANT! it is refrshing to see some original work on here...lately it's all been so...blah. lol. great stuff.

gorgeous format (although that must have taken forever).really poem.

those last four lines are the best in the poem. i really like the way you format - it adds spice to the poem. i also loved the last 4 lines of the 1st verse. fantastic work.

oh wow. excellent! i adore it! i really do! i love the style of writing! it reminds me of E.E. Cummings. awesome job!

-sunshine

Oh, this is so powerful. I love the way its written with all the italics and brakets and things. I especcially love the lines- those 3(i) sweet(love) words(you) /that i’ve always /been dying to say /(and(i) hear(love) from(you) you(too) )

that part was awesome. The whole thing was wonderful though. I really like it. I love your name by the way. Anyway, great work!