Very interesting ending, though a little abrupt. =) And hm.. murderer's minds eh? I like how you described them, and your slight rhyming. Not too much, not too little. Just the right amount. Keep writing! =D

Hmm. Please proofread this. There's some minor spelling errors, and I don't think you capitalized one "I". Besides that...naturally we shun people interested in killing other people. And I wouldn't go so far as to say all or even most murderers are intelligent. Well, this wasn't a horrible read, but I think with tweaking it could be much better.