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| Evelyn Tan 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting ending, though a little abrupt. =) And hm.. murderer's minds eh? I like how you described them, and your slight rhyming. Not too much, not too little. Just the right amount. Keep writing! =D |
| Elewyn 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHmm. Please proofread this. There's some minor spelling errors, and I don't think you capitalized one "I". Besides that...naturally we shun people interested in killing other people. And I wouldn't go so far as to say all or even most murderers are intelligent. Well, this wasn't a horrible read, but I think with tweaking it could be much better. |