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| gulistanlik 2008-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseOoh me likes this 'proseinpoem form thing'. The guy, man he was incredibly cute! both baby and boyish cute. So shy! Aw! Congratulations on a job well done. ^_^ gulistanlik |
| Shake Hips Not Fists 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was really charming and it is definitely going into my favorites. :) I like how the boy isn't all cocky and arrogant but shy and timid. :) Great job. |
| JeaLouS One 2006-10-31 ch 1, | abusetuggin' at my heartstrings, chiclets. You're quite good at that. |
| wandless 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was so incredibly sweet! Great job :). |
| mia 2006-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW! THAT ROX! I WISH THAT WAS ME LOL |
| mippon 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuse... ... AW! I'm typing this really fast 'cause there's a spider in my room and oh my gosh it's right there and it's scary but anyway this was a really good oneshot I loved it very much! Hehe. I likey. |
| The Banshee's Tears 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sweet. I dont know how to describe it except sweet. |
| Imaginary Parachute 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThis story is just amazing. It's almost masterful the way you've managed to capture the many stages of a budding relationship, and it is nothing short of amazing the way shyness is written it. I love that there's no dialogue until the very end. Overall, phenomenal work. Keep it up. |
| controv3rsyxx 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abusebeautiful! short and sweet, just the way i like it(: can't wait to read more of your writings(: |
| Euric's Creed 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abusebeautifully written. i loved the way it progressed. it really makes you think. bien. |